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Volume 3

Volume 3: Hidden Dragon in the Abyss

14. The Protagonist's Journey Begins

Reaching this point, finally... the story of the protagonist that I wanted to write from the very beginning has truly begun. To be honest, I really didn't intend to write such a long prequel-like narrative (which ended up being nearly 100,000 words). However, I felt that to properly introduce Chen Wenbin, I had to write the story of his parents. As I wrote, there were many times I felt unsatisfied, revising it again and again until it became what it is now. I hope that moving forward, I will have more inspiring plotlines and ideas to fully develop the main storyline.

15. Commercial Warfare Games and Learning Objectives

When considering how to depict the growth of the two young protagonists, I thought about how the Wealth Sect (Sect of Money Communes with the Gods) would train them. Recalling the sect's three distinct divisions and their respective functions, I realized I could incorporate specialized training simulations. While the Silver Pavilion represents standard banking operations, my setting for the Golden Pavilion operates like a board game—essentially a tabletop commercial warfare simulation evolved from concepts like D&D. Furthermore, intelligence analysis and decisive judgment are essential subjects for leaders, which ultimately gave rise to three distinct learning objectives. In fact, this commercial warfare simulation is not entirely my invention; I drew inspiration from graduate school simulation games I heard about while working at Columbia University. They played a scenario-based business management game where players encountered specific market crises and had to determine the appropriate response. For instance, if customers at a restaurant chain suffered food poisoning, players acting as the company PR or CEO had to make critical decisions. The scenario would continuously introduce unfolding events that players had to resolve. It is a highly fascinating game.

16. Growth and Martial Arts Progression

This segment of the story primarily details the growth of the two protagonists, preparing them for their eventual entry into the jianghu. Through these events, I wanted to place greater emphasis on their distinct martial arts paths and personalities, ensuring the narrative flows naturally without feeling rigid.

17. The Allusion to Parley

I spent a long time conceptualizing the Parley storyline. This is a fascinating historical allusion featured in Pirates of the Caribbean. Here is a brief piece of trivia: The concept originates from maritime and pirate lore. Derived from the French word parler (to speak), it refers to a formal conference or discussion between opposing forces during war or conflict, temporarily suspending hostilities to negotiate terms. It holds significant importance in naval warfare and pirate culture, protected by the customary laws of war.

Specific examples include:
Historical instance: During the Battles of Saratoga in the American Revolutionary War, British General John Burgoyne requested a parley with American General Horatio Gates, which ultimately led to the British surrender.
Fictional instance: In the film Pirates of the Caribbean, Elizabeth Swann invokes parley to negotiate with Captain Barbossa, reaching an agreement for a prisoner exchange.

18. Calculation and Psychological Warfare

In this chapter, the two protagonists finally begin to engage in deep calculation and strategic maneuvering. The primary challenge lay in seamlessly integrating this setting—demonstrating their formidable intellect and cunning while simultaneously contrasting the jianghu's flattery with its underlying disdain. This was certain to be the primary focus I maintained when conceptualizing and writing this chapter.

19. Writing Challenges and Narrative Continuity

Chapter 19 was actually written after a considerable hiatus. I was incredibly busy for a while, and writing a novel is truly a labor of mind and body. It requires extensive thought, and even after finishing a draft, dissatisfaction often leads to endless revisions. Furthermore, I frequently worried about whether the plotlines maintained seamless continuity with earlier chapters. Thus, this chapter represents a breakthrough after a significant period of writer's block.